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PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, '10, 11:55 pm 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Revo - Concerning Family and Career by Solar. You may use this topic to let Solar know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Revo - Concerning Family and Career. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, '10, 12:55 am 
This is awesome! I don't know why you were afraid, this is gold!

And this is meta-gaming. The players read and know the info in this text but their character do not. So don't worry about secrecy.


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, '10, 6:17 pm 
This is so cool, Solar. I'm all stupid excited to start writing more stuff for my own character, so I can't wait to hear more about Revo and everyone else, too.


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, '10, 2:40 pm 
Ah, the obscure days before Nathaniel Seth's era when Palm had an uncontrolled wildlife and inefficient human guards guarded access points ;-)

Keep it up, can't wait to read more.


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