by Snorb » Wed Feb 16, '11, 3:10 pm
I'm glad everyone liked Heartbeat, Heartbreak! Thanks for reading, everyone! ^_^
Of course, the problem with finishing it is now I'm gonna feel a little guilty about finishing up Fun in the Sun- that one was started with the intent that Rolf and Shir wind up together, as do Hugh and Amy. Instead, those couples don't stand the test of time- Hugh winds up with Shir, and Rolf (the hero) gets Amy (the staff girl).
Part one's pretty straightforward, but part two had some bits I left out- either because it was two in the morning when I finished writing part two, or I was a bit unsure what I could put in without getting moderated. Hence the ::blush:: warning in the comment box, but everyone is (mercifully) spared my descriptions of:
~Amy was supposed to be a bit more flirtatious and forward after the dinner scene. Chalk her current portrayal up to "it's two in the morning, I'm tired."
~Descriptions of agent casual clothing and lingerie being peeled away like artichoke leaves, something I don't think the mod squad would have let me get away with. =p
~The subtle implication that Amy might have become pregnant at the very end. I don't know, I think someone could read the last couple lines that way and think that.
Anyway, I'm glad everyone liked Heartbeat, Heartbreak! Now I just have to get myself to finish FitS, Ripple Effect, and Zero Hour ^_^
Read my social stuff!The ramblings of an oldish geezer on Facebook.
@SnorbESnorb on Twitter. The "E" stands for "Everything."
Play my games!The ArrrPG - A game I made about being a pirate. This be a first draft, matey! Though it plays just fine, clap yer eyes on th' eventual Revised an' Expanded Edition and you'll be pleased, by thunder!
Nakama: A Card Game of Magical Girls - A completely un-playtested card game about being a magical girl.
Well, excuse me while I defy all laws of logic and common sense and do it anyway.