Reviews of Poem: A Father's Shadow

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Very nice and "profound" poem, Rylen : congratulations. The style kis great too and I'm sure that I would never be able to write such things myself.

Read your poem the other night Rylen, and enjoyed it very much. You have a very good writing style. Would be interesting to read more writing works from you.

The older I get the more I can identify with some of the things you stated in your poem.

Just read over this poem again today and can't get over how one can identify with the words in the poem as one ages. So true. Great work Rylen!

Thank you. It was one of those poems that sat in my head for well close to a year. What triggered the idea is that as I've gotten older. The more that I think and act how my father does. Sometimes it's way more subtle. My best writing is stuff that comes out after it has jelled for a while.