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Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby Review Type S-2 » Tue Dec 24, '13, 9:46 pm

Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding A Peculiar Christmas by tilinelson2. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in A Peculiar Christmas. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help tilinelson2 in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Thu Dec 26, '13, 12:07 am

Absolutely beautiful story tilinelson2! Thank you for sharing it with us on this Christmas Day. What better gift than to give and share the spirit of Christmas with someone else. Excellent!! :clap:
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby doncair99 » Thu Dec 26, '13, 10:16 pm

Thank you very much, tilinelson for sharing that story! Not only does it capture the spirit of Christmas, but it captures the attitude of Christianity itself. What a creative way to connect the life of Earth to Algol and it also serves as a foreshadowing tool since the Earthmen makes a cameo later in the PS II story.

Grammatically, you've already addressed that you'd edit later, so there's not much more to say.
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby tilinelson2 » Wed Jan 8, '14, 1:14 am

Thanks for the kind words, people. I haven't had the time to proofread it yet, but I am glad that idea of mine it was an enjoyable read.
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Thu Dec 25, '14, 6:00 am

Christmas day 2014 and a good time to re-read this story again. Excellent work!! :)
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Wed Dec 9, '15, 1:34 am

Christmas 2015 is drawing near and always a good time to reread this excellent story by tilinelson2!
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Fri Dec 1, '17, 9:08 pm

Reading this story again for the 2017 Christmas season! Wonderful! :clap:
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby myau56 » Sun Dec 3, '17, 6:32 pm

I had never read this story but now it's done ! Nice story, tilinelson2 ! :clap:
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Dec 4, '18, 8:36 pm

A beautiful story to read again at this holiday season and anytime. Written by tilinelson2. :clap:
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Re: Reviews of A Peculiar Christmas

Postby myau56 » Fri Dec 7, '18, 12:25 pm

Very beautiful story ! Congratulations ! :) :clap:
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