Hello,
This topic is for reviews of His Mission, the fan fiction by V-Alis. You may use this topic to let us know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.
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Thanks,
Thoul