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Reviews of Walking Together Into Eternity
by Review Type S-2 » Thu Mar 14, '13, 7:51 pm
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Re: Reviews of Walking Together Into Eternity
by augmentedfourth » Sat Mar 16, '13, 11:59 pm
Aww, tili, you're turning soft on us. A story with a happy ending and no torture along the way? 
All joking aside, this was a very sweet story. Even in just a few short pages, you captured the emotional significance of the moment and offered a nice look into the feelings of both Rhys and Maia. What I really like is how you seemed to enhance that even with all the stress and planning and over-the-top details that can go into weddings (believe me, I know), what's really significant is the love between the happy couple. The wedding is just one day. Everything that comes next is more important!
All joking aside, this was a very sweet story. Even in just a few short pages, you captured the emotional significance of the moment and offered a nice look into the feelings of both Rhys and Maia. What I really like is how you seemed to enhance that even with all the stress and planning and over-the-top details that can go into weddings (believe me, I know), what's really significant is the love between the happy couple. The wedding is just one day. Everything that comes next is more important!
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Re: Reviews of Walking Together Into Eternity
by tilinelson2 » Sun Mar 17, '13, 2:45 pm
Thanks for reading and the kind words. I think I had managed to capture the feeling of the moment because this story is kinda a mixture of Rhys marriage and mine. In fact, it was written more as a subtle way to spread the news that I have got married to people 
However, I am glad that I was able to put across my feelings about weddings and the married life with this short piece. And I am also glad that I was able to write something after a few months without writing anything.
However, I am glad that I was able to put across my feelings about weddings and the married life with this short piece. And I am also glad that I was able to write something after a few months without writing anything.
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