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PostPosted: Thu Jun 6, '13, 4:50 am 

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Phantasy Star Story Redux by Atlinsmere. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Phantasy Star Story Redux. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Atlinsmere in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Phantasy Star Story Redux. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 19, '13, 5:13 pm 
Great beginning to the story Atlin. You have left many things for us to wonder what the outcome will be .. including learning more about each of the characters you have mentioned so far. Looking forward to reading more of these adventures. And, maybe the girl will warm up to him a bit more after all he did just save her life!!

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