I just read this story, snorb, and LOVED it! Very appropriate for Valentine's Day, and just for anytime for all of us romantics to read!
I enjoyed the romance, but also the humor, and the cameraderie between the two
as they discussed issues of the heart, shared advice, etc. And, then the meeting where the Prince and the girl professed their love for each other was a very special and endearing moment.
I liked a lot of the descriptive words you used and felt they really set the scene, as in:
"(Damn thorns, Ayn cursed)", talking about the roses he had picked, and also "Gently, gracefully, Thea took Ayn's gifts," and especially in the words Ayn used to describe Thea to Mieu..
I liked that the story was about, or mentioned several couples, not just one. This shows that romance and love are felt and shown by many, I think.
I thought the line that mentioned
"Butch McDick", I think it is, was hilarious, lol.
Great story and wonderful romance! I loved it all very much.
