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Thanks,
Thoul

All these poems were written by a great man named Dean Lorne Federle. February 8, 1966 - February 21, 2011.

With the help of my mind and the internet, I made a poem for my uncle. I'll share that here right now.

Farewell
No farewell words spoken,
No time to say goodbye,
You were gone before we knew it,
And it makes us question why,
For you had such a big heart,
It was you, with whom we had to part.

Interesting poems. Your uncle was probably the go-to guy for a good story, I bet.

Very touching stuff Atlin, your uncle sounded like an awesome bloke

Well, he worked at 7-Eleven for nine years I think it was, until he injured his leg which he never recovered from. Also, I just counted (forget the exact number) and there is nineteen (or so) poems left. I'll put another one up tomorrow.

It was a pleasure reading your uncle's poems, Atlin. Thank you for sharing them with us all. He was a very talented man. I look forward to reading more of the poems. You did very well with the tribute poem also. It was very moving.

I'll be typing up another poem either later tonight or tomorrow.

The next poem is called "The Bond of Friendship"

Three poems uploaded today.

The Bond of Friendship, Survivor's Dream, and Friendship are now ready to be read.

Next poem: Job Searching

Still around 14 or so poems.

"Job Searching" is now up.

Next poem: False Friends

"False Friends" is up.

Next Poem: Fun