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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, '18, 4:03 am 
Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Just A Boring Valentine's Day by tilinelson2. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Just A Boring Valentine's Day. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help tilinelson2 in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Just A Boring Valentine's Day. If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, '18, 6:47 pm 
Aw, a beautiful and loving story for Valentine's Day or any day! You really show the love they have for each other. Great writing tilinelson2.

Love the parts about Mr. and Mrs. Boredom, ( I think what may seem boring to some may not be boring to others), and that even though they have been married for years, she will always be his girlfriend ). Melts your heart!


Last edited by Silver_Surfer1 on Sun Jun 17, '18, 6:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, '18, 11:35 am 
Really touching serie here ! Congratulations, dear tilinelson2 ! :clap:


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