Reviews of Amidst the Blizzard

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Reviews of Amidst the Blizzard

Postby Review Type S-2 » Mon Feb 4, '08, 4:27 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Amidst the Blizzard, the fan fiction by Kaloes. You may use this topic to let Kaloes know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Amidst the Blizzard. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

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Thoul
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Postby Thoul » Tue Feb 5, '08, 6:16 am

Wow, that was an incredibly sad story. I knew what was probably going to be coming at the end, but even so it had a lot of impact. I really feel for the poor guy.
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Re: Reviews of Amidst the Blizzard

Postby H-Man » Mon Jul 12, '10, 7:13 pm

Yeah, that was pretty sad. Stories like this really remind us of how harsh and un-romantic the Phantasy Star world could be.
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