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Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Review Type S-2 » Fri Mar 11, '11, 10:12 pm

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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Atlinsmere » Fri Mar 11, '11, 10:25 pm

All these poems were written by a great man named Dean Lorne Federle. February 8, 1966 - February 21, 2011.

With the help of my mind and the internet, I made a poem for my uncle. I'll share that here right now.

Farewell
No farewell words spoken,
No time to say goodbye,
You were gone before we knew it,
And it makes us question why,
For you had such a big heart,
It was you, with whom we had to part.
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby carlsojos » Sat Mar 12, '11, 12:30 am

Interesting poems. Your uncle was probably the go-to guy for a good story, I bet.
In some stories, the princess is her own hero....
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Lucas » Sat Mar 12, '11, 12:48 am

Very touching stuff Atlin, your uncle sounded like an awesome bloke :)
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Atlinsmere » Sat Mar 12, '11, 6:07 am

Well, he worked at 7-Eleven for nine years I think it was, until he injured his leg which he never recovered from. Also, I just counted (forget the exact number) and there is nineteen (or so) poems left. I'll put another one up tomorrow.
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Sat Mar 12, '11, 11:16 pm

It was a pleasure reading your uncle's poems, Atlin. Thank you for sharing them with us all. He was a very talented man. I look forward to reading more of the poems. You did very well with the tribute poem also. It was very moving. :)
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Atlinsmere » Sun Mar 13, '11, 5:02 am

I'll be typing up another poem either later tonight or tomorrow.

The next poem is called "The Bond of Friendship"
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Atlinsmere » Tue Mar 15, '11, 9:38 pm

Three poems uploaded today.

The Bond of Friendship, Survivor's Dream, and Friendship are now ready to be read.

Next poem: Job Searching

Still around 14 or so poems.
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Atlinsmere » Thu Mar 17, '11, 3:34 am

"Job Searching" is now up.

Next poem: False Friends
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Re: Reviews of In Memory of my Uncle

Postby Atlinsmere » Fri Mar 18, '11, 3:40 am

"False Friends" is up.

Next Poem: Fun
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