Reviews of Her Last Breath (Lyrics)

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It’s pretty good atlin I ended up listening to the original theme while reading what you had, but for some reason my train of thought kept going off and I was reading it in a fashion similar to how some Linkin Park songs are done. Whatever the case it’s pretty creative what you’ve done here. So nice job.

Haha, maybe you should listen to less Linkin Park than my friend. Thanks for the words, I play on making more lyrics to various songs, it was fun doing this and the next one I might do is Kakariko Village from Legend of Zelda.

As far as lyrics go, I think it sounds fine... I'm not really sure what the original sounds like. It tells the story well!