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PostPosted: Sun Mar 27, '11, 11:54 pm 
Both chapters are enjoyable, but I have to say I liked the first one more. Probably because of Shir - you always write her as a free, unrestricted spirit. Her unpredictability always adds flair and activity to a story. Amy and Rolf are more sedate by comparison. That's not always a bad thing, but just not what I'm in the mood for from a story right now.


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