Reviews of A Reason to Remain

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Intriguing story. The relationship between these two seems to be getting deeper in more ways than one. Good thing Anna was there for Rolf and helped him see things in a different way. We all could use someone like that at various times. Very powerful sentence and statement in these words... "The past tragedies should not be instruments of sorrow to drag him down and making him feel powerless to change the present and the future the same way he was powerless to change the past, but as lessons to be learned the hard way.".... I like that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing SS1! I'm glad that sometimes my writings provide something more than entertainment.