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Reviews of Spoils of War

Postby Review Type S-2 » Mon Feb 7, '11, 3:22 pm

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Spoils of War by tilinelson2. You may use this topic to let tilinelson2 know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Re: Reviews of Spoils of War

Postby H-Man » Wed Mar 9, '11, 12:38 pm

Okay, I read it. It's wasn't as horrible as I was expecting, but it was pretty darn downbeat. That said, it's a nicely original perspective on what Layan culture might have been like and makes you really for sorry for Alair. Poor girl. One of your better stories.
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