Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

[Review Type S-2]

Hello,

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Thanks,
Thoul

[H-Man]

Wow, you really don't have a problem of putting your characters through some grimy, gritty hell, do you?

Nicely written, although there were a number of Portuguesisms in the story. I'll PM you some of them for future reference.