
Yay, for non-dark and non-gruesome fanfics!
Although I do kinda enjoy the dark and gruesome ones sometimes also.

Anyway, I agree with augmentedfourth about Kain's speech kinda getting on my nerves at some points, but I tried to listen more to "what" he was saying rather than "how" he was saying it, and that made it a little easier for me to enjoy the story.
Great title to the story, and very nicely written, and I find myself wishing that this one could be continued somehow, with both these characters getting brave enough to finally reveal their feelings to each other. Could be a heck of another story there somewhere.
