by Snorb » Sat Sep 13, '08, 6:29 pm
Kaloes: Look above your last post. =p
In all seriousness, I'm liking this. Mars is quite the * for being Mieu's daughter (and the first person besides Alisa to use swords one-handed, unless she has a shortsword or received some specialist sword/claw training). Wren was introduced in typical awesome fashion- I even imagined the PSIV-style manga panels:
Panel 1: Cillean soldier towering over Mars. Framed so you can't see past him.
Panel 2: Close up of Cillean soldier's face. Orgy of violence.
Panel 3: Results. An eighteen-inch hole has been blasted through his head, with a shadowy figure visible on the entrance wound side.
Panel 4: Close up, Mars's face, shocked.
Panel 5: Cillean soldier sighs through his newly-acquired sucking cranial wound, falls to ground, and expires. Messily.
Panel 6: Establishing shot of Wren.
Still wondering just who this cascade-haired young man is, though! The Prince of Cille (Maia's son? Lyle's son? Their mutual son!?) What of Thea, too?
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