Reviews of Betrayal

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Reviews of Betrayal

Postby Review Type S-2 » Fri Oct 26, '07, 1:17 am

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Betrayal, the fan fiction by Kaloes. You may use this topic to let Kaloes know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Betrayal. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

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Thoul
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Re: Reviews of Betrayal

Postby vontrapp » Fri Aug 20, '10, 7:43 pm

It's an interesting piece to read from Lyle's perspective of the kidnapping that starts the saga rolling :up:
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Re: Reviews of Betrayal

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Mon Aug 23, '10, 4:46 am

Interesting story. I really liked the kidnapping during the wedding.
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Re: Reviews of Betrayal

Postby tilinelson2 » Mon Aug 23, '10, 2:15 pm

Interesting piece, it deals with a obscure thing in PSIII that remains unexplained that is how/why Maia did appear in Landen shores.

It is interesting to point that it isn't the first time I've seen the theory that somebody was trying to murder Maia.
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