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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, '08, 4:48 am 
Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Dumpster Diving For Fun and Profit, the fan fiction by Snorb. You may use this topic to let Snorb know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Dumpster Diving For Fun and Profit. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.

Thanks,
Thoul


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, '08, 4:57 am 
I used Shir's Japanese name in the story due to my preference- I just think Shiruka sounds a bit more complete than Shir. Other than that, I hope I got everyone's character right. yay first fic, so please be brutal ^_^)


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, '08, 5:04 am 
Ahh... That was great. xD I loved Hugh's fascination, though it ended up backfiring in the end. You should definitely write more, Snorb.


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, '08, 5:25 am 
definetly write more.. i enjoyed this, and i bet everyone else will to.. its good to see other people writing for a change though :rofl:


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, '08, 6:33 pm 
lol, I really liked the "to be continued..." ending. XDDD Also, do you really find the Jetscooter like that? XD


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, '08, 6:59 pm 
if you did then my life woulda been easier yesterday when i was trying to get it for the past 3 days ><


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, '08, 3:00 am 
Interesting story, and not what you would typically expect, lol. Can't wait to read the sequel. :yaknow:


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, '08, 6:30 am 
Nice... very vivid imagery and excellent characterization. Especially on Shir and her smelling Laconia excuse for not going with the others.


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, '08, 7:43 am 
I always thought Shir should have been able to join before you get the Jet Scooter. It's stupid that Piata has all those bridges around it and none of them connect to the rest of Motavia. Of course any well-written story that focuses around Rolf, Nei, and Shir certainly has my approval.


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, '08, 7:17 pm 
Perhaps I'm just a curmudgeon, but I stopped reading after "T_T"

It's about Shir? Maybe I'll give it another chance.


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