Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

by **Review Type S-2** » Fri Sep 30, '11, 4:59 am

Hello,

You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding The Girl in the Window by Snorb. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in The Girl in the Window. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help Snorb in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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by **tilinelson2** » Fri Sep 30, '11, 12:18 pm

Oh, man, very nice. It is a superb description of internal thoughts and feelings in this Internet age; on how much humanity we build of a cold list of tastes, preferences, etc, from an unknown person.

Assuming it is a personal story, I hope The Girl in the Window becomes The girl on the other side of the table, staring at me even if only for five minutes.