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Reviews of Her Last Breath (Lyrics)

Postby Review Type S-2 » Thu Nov 8, '12, 6:28 am

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Re: Reviews of Her Last Breath (Lyrics)

Postby Lucas » Fri Nov 9, '12, 4:50 am

It’s pretty good atlin I ended up listening to the original theme while reading what you had, but for some reason my train of thought kept going off and I was reading it in a fashion similar to how some Linkin Park songs are done. Whatever the case it’s pretty creative what you’ve done here. So nice job. :up:
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Re: Reviews of Her Last Breath (Lyrics)

Postby Atlinsmere » Fri Nov 9, '12, 6:41 am

Haha, maybe you should listen to less Linkin Park than my friend. Thanks for the words, I play on making more lyrics to various songs, it was fun doing this and the next one I might do is Kakariko Village from Legend of Zelda.
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Re: Reviews of Her Last Breath (Lyrics)

Postby doncair99 » Tue Jan 1, '13, 3:40 am

As far as lyrics go, I think it sounds fine... I'm not really sure what the original sounds like. It tells the story well!
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