Reviews of Clarity

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You may use this topic to share your thoughts regarding Clarity by augmentedfourth. When reviewing, try to go into detail about what you enjoy or feel could be improved in Clarity. Both praise and constructive criticism intended to help augmentedfourth in future endeavors are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive comments.

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Fringes of Algo Staff

Very interesting story. Captured my interest from the start and kept it all the way through. Terrific writing and descriptive detail. Enjoyed it very much.

It has been a while since I read a new Phantasy Star fanfiction (I am unable to write anything myself), and I am glad you did. Your writing is flawless, as always, and you always manage to bring an interesting story out of Phantasy Star lore.

I love when people give life to npcs or even pcs that had no development on the game, and your Damor story is very good in trying to explain the circumstances Alis & her companions meet him and his eccentric questions. You gave a new meaning to a forgetable npc, so thanks for sharing your views with us. Also, it is always nice to read something fresh about the first game, that is so overlooked.

Thanks for reading! I know a lot of the game's minor details were never meant to have much significance from the point of view of the designers, but it's fun to create stories based on them sometimes. And Damor was always the best part of that headache-inducing tower.