Reviews of Dream of a Rose

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Excellent!!

I like this format, and you have a wonderful way with words.

Offhand, I'd guess it may be talking about Mieu because of the crimson hair remarks, but I could be wrong.

Thanks for the kind words, SS1! If one person enjoyed it, it was worth writing

And sorry, no e-cookie for you SS1! The character used as an inspiration fits in many ways the scene and feelings portrayed in the poem.

Bumping this up again. It is beautiful. Anyone else want to guess who the character might be?

Bumping this up again.

Poetry for Valentine's Day is always appropriate. I felt the need to read this again. It is almost bittersweet in many ways. A joy to read.