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Reviews of Vahal Fort
by Review Type S-2 » Fri Nov 19, '10, 7:47 pm
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Re: Reviews of Vahal Fort
by Xander » Sun Nov 21, '10, 12:53 pm
Well it's definitely a good way of creating some interest among those not involved in EOTA. 
And besides, it's good to see something about the EOTA world that doesn't involve our lot, which is also a plus. And given how you're a really good writer, in my opinion, you really ought to try and put more of this stuff out there. A little something to keep it fresh for those unfamiliar with the world.
And that's it really. I'm not much good at reviewing fiction except to say whether it's good or not.
But as I said, do more of this.
And besides, it's good to see something about the EOTA world that doesn't involve our lot, which is also a plus. And given how you're a really good writer, in my opinion, you really ought to try and put more of this stuff out there. A little something to keep it fresh for those unfamiliar with the world.
And that's it really. I'm not much good at reviewing fiction except to say whether it's good or not.
But as I said, do more of this.
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Re: Reviews of Vahal Fort
by Aeroprism » Mon Nov 22, '10, 4:11 pm
Thank you Xander.
Second part is posted.
Second part is posted.
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Re: Reviews of Vahal Fort
by Tanith » Mon Nov 29, '10, 5:39 pm
I've read through chapter three now, and you can weave quite an intricate battle scene, that's for sure. It reads like scenes from an epic space movie. The pace of your story is wonderful, too, plus I'm enjoying the multiple settings. Also, it's good to read some more about the core characters of EOTA. Though this is action-heavy and there's not been much opportunity to delve into a more detailed character analysis, you still manage to slip in bits of their individual personalities as they recall their weapons, training and origins. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.
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Re: Reviews of Vahal Fort
by Aeroprism » Mon Nov 29, '10, 6:17 pm
Thank you Tanith. I really need to update this.
As in, right now.
As in, right now.
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Re: Reviews of Vahal Fort
by Tanith » Tue Nov 30, '10, 2:53 am
Whoa, nice little cliffhanger there at the end of chapter four. Looks like the two story lines are about to cross more definitely. Can't wait for the next bit.
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