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Reviews of Beyond Reality
by Review Type S-2 » Fri Jul 9, '10, 7:16 pm
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Re: Reviews of Beyond Reality
by H-Man » Mon Jul 12, '10, 1:35 am
Well, I guess I should explain an element of the story before you read (or review) it, so that it makes a little more sense. If if it isn't very apparent, the story is something of a Mary Sue in the characterizations of the three main male characters, being based off of yours truly and two of his friends. As a result, the dialogue and expressions used by them are a bit specific and unique. It's said that dialogue should be realistic and the way people actually talk. Thus, I drew inspiration from my interactions with my friends. As a result, the dialogue is something of a two-edged sword: it is believable (yes, we do talk like that) but it comes across as something of an inside joke. Okay, just had to explain. Please read and enjoy.
*H-Man as Chaz, looks at Rika, aka Paula* Chaz-Man- "Hey, I've been wandering around Motavia for quite a while with you now. It says in that weird blue box up there that one more battle with a sandworm and we can level up to husband and wife!"
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Re: Reviews of Beyond Reality
by Silver_Surfer1 » Thu Aug 5, '10, 4:41 am
I finally finished reading this one and thoroughly enjoyed it. It was a very novel idea in how the guys came to be there. Don't think I have ever read a story based like that before, and it was very unique. A lot of action, which I liked, and yeah, the language was very realistic also. I am glad to see the characters continue on in another story also.
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Re: Reviews of Beyond Reality
by tilinelson2 » Fri Nov 26, '10, 12:53 pm
Very intriguing. The guys suddenly are into the Phantasy Star III world and we still don't know if that is true or not. I think I'll discover that on the next stories. Great stuff.
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