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by Celeith » Fri Apr 25, '08, 12:11 am
Re-editing Chapter Ten
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by snowdragon » Thu Jun 5, '08, 7:17 pm
The finale sounds exciting.
his heart knows only virtue,
his blade defends the helpless,
his might upholds the weak,
his word speaks only truth,
his wrath undoes the wicked
(The Old Code - Dragonheart )
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by Celeith » Tue Aug 26, '08, 11:20 pm
Finished the re-edit of Chapter Ten. I decided to go with my original approach on this chapter then what it originally was. I hope you guys enjoy the re-edit and I'll be sure to keep the story alive until the finale.
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by Celeith » Thu Aug 28, '08, 6:33 pm
Chapter Eleven is up and ready to be read
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by Celeith » Sat Aug 30, '08, 6:16 pm
Alys adventures are finally over. The story of Alone in the World has finally reached its finale. I thank you all for supporting me and helping me. Without all of you I would have never been able to finish this story.
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by Srijita » Mon Sep 1, '08, 4:58 pm
[face=Times New Roman]A compelling finale. Way to go, Kaloes; this is some achievement. 
I plan to go back and reread the whole thing, from start to finish, when time permits.[/face]
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