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Re: Reviews of Accepting Fate

Postby Lucas » Fri May 28, '10, 1:08 am

Thanks Tanith, I’m glad it’s been enjoyed. When I originally started this I didn’t know if using original main characters would be a good idea, or creating an alternate story set in the same universe would work. But it survived 16 chapters. Thanks for all the support. :D

Hmmm, in March I managed to write 10 chapters, for April 3 and May 3. Yep work definitely got the better of me these last two months.
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Re: Reviews of Accepting Fate

Postby Lucas » Fri Jul 2, '10, 12:07 am

Okay guys I’ve made a list of all the enemies that appear in my fan fiction so far (a bestiary if you will). Chapter 17 is coming soon hopefully this weekend I’ll have the new story arc up and running.

List of enemies from the Phantasy Star games:

Enemy:
Game of Origin:
Chapter it appears in:


Profound Darkness
Phantasy Star IV
First appearance Chapter 1 and many others
afterwards (main antagonist for the story)

Dark Force
Phantasy Star
First mentioned in Chapter 2,
first appears in Chapter 14 (another major antagonist)

Whistle
Phantasy Star II
Appears in Chapter 3, but as a security
robot not so much an enemy

Rappy
Phantasy Star III as Chirper
Phantasy IV as Rappy
Does not actually appear but Autumn calls a
hunter “Rappy-brain!” out of frustration in
chapter 3

Sandworm
Phantasy Star
Appears in Chapter 5

Dominator
Phantasy Star IV
Appears in Chapter 6

Warren286
Phantasy Star IV
Appears in Chapter 7

Dragon
Phantasy Star
First mentioned in chapter 6 on a wanted
poster at the Guild, the very same dragon
appears in chapter 13 and at the end of
chapter 16

Locusta
Phantasy Star II
Appears in chapter 7

Fanbite
Phantasy Star II
Mentioned in Chapter 7, but does not
actually appear, the weaker relative the
Locusta appears instead

Medusa
Phantasy Star
First appears in chapter 8 (main antagonist
for chapters 9 and 10)

Flatter Plant
Phantasy Star IV
Appears in Chapter 9

Sand Newt
Phantasy Star IV
Appears in Chapter 9

Scorpirus
Phantasy Star IV
Appears in Chapter 11

Chaos Sorcerer
Phantasy Star as Magician
Phantasy Star IV as Chaos Sorcerer
Appears in Chapter 13

Prophallus
Phantasy Star IV
Briefly mentioned in Chapter 14,
but does not appear

Shrieker
Phantasy Star IV
Appears in Chapter 15

RobotCop
Phantasy Star
Appears in Chapter 3,
but as a security robot not so
much an enemy

Antlion
Phantasy Star
Mentioned during chapter 9,
but does not actually appear

Olga-Flow
Phantasy Star Online
Hinted at during Chapter 14 but not
explicitly explained until the end of
chapter 17, has not actually appeared
as of yet
Last edited by Lucas on Fri Jul 2, '10, 12:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Reviews of Accepting Fate

Postby Tanith » Fri Jul 2, '10, 4:51 am

Thanks for the reference, Lucas! It really highlights the effort you've put into including so many of the fantastic enemies and bosses in the PS series. They often get overlooked in fanfic (me included, though I do have one boss fanfic), so thank you for bringing them into your fics.
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Re: Reviews of Accepting Fate

Postby Lucas » Tue Jul 6, '10, 12:41 am

Your welcome Tanith, thanks for appreciating. :D

Well chapter 17 of Accepting Fate is finally up. The characters are still kicking and breathing it’s taken me a while to find time to start writing again. Hopefully more will come soon.

I still have a few things to sort out especially with the old characters being introduced to new characters. Also I have now added another two major villains to the story, so I’ll get around to revealing their motives soon enough. Hope you guys enjoy. :wink:

Remember this is the start of a new story arc so expect to see a lot of Elisa I’ve even thought of giving her a few chapters to herself.
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Re: Reviews of Accepting Fate

Postby tilinelson2 » Sun Mar 20, '11, 10:02 pm

The first story (16 chapters) was really awesome! The alternate PS universe is pretty cool. All the original characters are quite good, the action and the suspense very cool. There are some typos along the story, but it is really hard to perfect everything.

I really liked it. Looking forward to read more about these cool chars.
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Re: Reviews of Accepting Fate

Postby Lucas » Sat Mar 26, '11, 1:21 am

Yeah, I probably should go read all over it again one day and pick out those little mistakes. Anyway I'm very happy you enjoyed what you've read so far tilinelson. :)
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