Chapter 14: OMG! Poor Elisa! PD is really toying with her now, huh? One minor suggestion: I think you wrote that the black hole was "to the right" of Dezolis, right? Something like that? (Dang, I should have written it down!) Anyway, since "to the right" could be pretty much any direction in terms of space, you might want to leave it out and just stick with the distance (unless it doesn't matter to you).
Woohoo! Chapter 15 had me on the edge of my seat!
The appearance of Re-Faze had me cheering! I didn't get the old man from chapter 4 connection because I'm an idiot.

Or, maybe it's because it's been a while since I read that chapter. I bet if I read your chapters continuously right now I'd have gotten it. Awesome connection!
Can't wait for the next chapter, Lucas!