Great fanfic. Words mean nothing if they are not backed up with actions. When someone does the right thing, he doesn't have to say a word, he doesn't have to ask for forgiveness for his mistakes.
Sari did a good job showing Lune that, to be accepted, it was not a matter of diplomacy. It was a matter of starting doing the things the right way. Things should be that way in real life as well.
The Crys part is fun. I never imagine him a crazy boy, but I think he owes something from his mother

And Ayn... of course he owes his good character to his mother

Loved it. I hope you keep writing great PS fanfics
