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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, '11, 6:01 pm 

This topic is for reviews of A Little Push (Wonder Boy III fanfic) by H-Man. You may use this topic to let H-Man know what you think of this work. When commenting, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of A Little Push (Wonder Boy III fanfic). If you would like to discuss another writing, please do so in that writing's review thread.


PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, '11, 6:31 pm 
Very beautiful and moving story. You've paid a wonderful homage to your late friend. Knowing the full story makes it even better.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, '11, 6:57 pm 
Good story. Indeed, it seems to explore a fear of becoming that you hate, and how even what appears to be truly horrible may not be as it seems. I spotted a couple minor grammar issues, but nothing that detracts from the message.

PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, '11, 11:03 pm 
Interesting story. For a minute I wondered if this might turn out to be a "Beauty & The Beast" type of story, or something along those lines. I don't know if there are any plans to continue this story, or not, but it certainly would be interesting to see what happens to him on his journey(s) and to find out whether he can find a way to reverse his current situation, and also what might become of his newfound friendship.. The ending was very hopeful and leaves the reader with a good feeling.

Very touching tribute to your friend, H-Man! :)

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