Ok, here is my complete run down of all I think could be changed on your three songs. Keywords: "I think" and "could". This is my OPINION, it is not the truth or an absolute. We are two different artists so, there is a definite chance that what I think will be of little consequence. Take what you want, use what you need, discard the rest: they're your songs, not mine. Also, nest time I post a remix, make sure to throw the ball back to me.
Mkay. Let's roll. You already know I liked how you balanced your volumes so I won't go into length here. You have next to no audio clipping so, that is good considering it's something very hard to achieve.
First thing first, here is something that applies to your three songs so, I will only write once and elaborate: you really like to mix brass sections and electro strings. It really looks like a "feel" you are looking for but I can't say that I personally think it appropriate for the following reasons. Since you use those two a lot, they drive the mood across all your songs and here is what I think. Laughter, for instance: That track is supposed to be the epitome of dread and fear PS4 has to provide. An upbeat, cheery brass section does not convey fear; it changes the song into something that resembles Ska and I'm fairly certain that Ska has never scared anybody. Another way of seeing it: a brass section makes me expect Zio to stop fighting and break into a tap dance routine. Try something darker, unless it's a feel you were SPECIFICALLY trying to get. Meet them head on: The brass section issue and the trombone that play the main melody; they sound great, they do, but they make me want to dance, not fight. Then again I never liked that song (the original I mean) so, I am biased. Rise or Fall is probably the song where your combo works best, it's still very upbeat/cheery but it works. You'll notice that my first Rise or Fall remix was driven by strings and a trumpet so, there you go.
As for generic comments: Laughter: A very good product. I love the drum, I really, really do. Great quality, perfect volume, everything works 100%. At 1:45, when you kick in the second part of the song with the high strings, I feel they lack something. Try adding some reverb maybe? You could also try to lower them by an octave; I find that the contrast between the high strings and the low growly bass is too sharp. I still need to say how much I love your choice of drums for this song.
Meet them head on: the very first instrument, the one that plays the intro/very quick notes. It sounds like an orchestra hit coming from an old keyboard synth from the 80s. I understand that working with midi sound fonts must be challenging, considering they are an extremely outdated technology, but I'm sure you can find a better candidate. Seriously though, everything else is fine with it. I'd try sharper instruments for the melody and something somewhat less silly for the intro and you'd have a solid result.
Rise or Fall: Now this song I remixed t twice so, I know by heart, inside-out. I don't feel that your drums are too quiet, they're fine. I really like the brass instrument you use from 0:41, it brings something really cool to the song. As for the only thing I'd have changed: there are incorrect notes in the intro. Listen carefully to the chords playing in the background, there is a dissonance that I'm not sure you want to keep.
And that's that. Solid results that could become legendary with a little polish.
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