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Postby meteor9 » Tue Aug 10, '10, 5:40 pm

Kyra again, only hopefully less crap this time. Thoughts?
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby vontrapp » Tue Aug 10, '10, 6:33 pm

Nice work looks really good :up:
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby Silver_Surfer1 » Tue Aug 10, '10, 10:54 pm

Great job. I like the weapon too. :)
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby Tanith » Wed Aug 11, '10, 1:13 pm

Do you do any animations? I can easily picture your art as animated. I really like this one, just like the last one. Do more, do more! :D
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby Thoul » Thu Aug 12, '10, 1:17 am

Great work, meteor9. I love the details you put into this piece. You've got the Esper symbol on her collar, which is something many people overlook. The slasher is very well rendered. It looks like a real boomerang, with the added ornamental detail.

The background is great as well. I particularly like that the snow slightly covers Kyra's feet. It really puts her inside the environment and not just laid over it as some artists would place her.

The expression on her face is perfect for a battle, too. I don't know who's going to be on the receiving end of that technique (or is it a skill?), but that is definitely going to hurt.
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby Atlinsmere » Thu Aug 12, '10, 4:00 am

I thought I already replied to this. Well, first off, I'd just like to say, good job. Thoul pointed out some really good details that I would have missed otherwise. In my opinion though, if she were standing up just a tiny, tiny bit straighter, it would have been a little better. But what do I know right? I'm stuck on Base drawing at the moment. <.<

Keep up the good work.
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby meteor9 » Thu Aug 12, '10, 5:16 am

Atlinsmere wrote:I thought I already replied to this. Well, first off, I'd just like to say, good job. Thoul pointed out some really good details that I would have missed otherwise. In my opinion though, if she were standing up just a tiny, tiny bit straighter, it would have been a little better. But what do I know right? I'm stuck on Base drawing at the moment. <.<

Keep up the good work.



One doesn't need an expert to be able to see what's off. The pose is a bit awkward, so that probably would've helped a bit yeah.
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby H-Man » Thu Aug 12, '10, 1:02 pm

It does look very good, meteor. And I think I speak for all when I thank you for contributing to the collection of Kyra artwork here. :)
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby Wolf Bird » Sun Aug 15, '10, 2:49 pm

Always nice to see more Kyra fanart. She does not receive enough love. I also have to say that I LOVE how you drew her with feet sinking into the snow a bit. I don't know why, but I love that.
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Re: Not as Innocent

Postby Celeith » Sun Aug 15, '10, 8:11 pm

This is a pretty good image, which I love any images of Kyra anyways cause she is just a really cool character.
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