by Jack Lias » Sun Nov 7, '10, 4:36 am
I apologize in advance if I offend you with this post.
The character design is well-done. If that's your second piece ever done, then I have to give you credit, most beginners aren't that talented when it comes to art. If it's your second Phantasy Star piece, but not your second drawing, then disregard my previous comment. I suck, and I need to learn to read, apparently. On your next piece, I would recommend experimenting a little (you know, since you're trying to get good and all, which includes discovering other methods). For her outline, try using markers, and for whatever's inside of the outline, use pencil crayons.
You were right about the arms, but with practice, you'll become a master of it. The only real problem I see is in her arm that's raised. In the part that's attached to her hand, you can clearly see that her muscles are flexed a little, which does happen when people raise their arms in that manner. The problem though, is that the wrong part of her arm seems to be flexed. If I sit here and raise my arm in the exact same manner, the part of my arm that's attached to my torso gets bigger, while the portion that's attached to my hand says relatively the same.
...Maybe I'm just nitpicking. In any case, sorry. I do like the picture, though!
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