Hahaha, cool! Blonde Alys, I wouldn't have dared! But a pink outfit? Alys probably wouldn't be seen dead in that. *lifts slicer threateningly*
Just pulling your leg, Gryz.
You're geting there, slowly but surely. Try to add some more shading on your next one. The more detail you add, the more professional your work will look.
Here's my best achievement to date:

Hope you surpass me soon!
EDIT:
You used this as a reference, didn't you. Yeah, it's a rare to see Alys and Rune together like this.
Wish there were more...