I love and appreciate my ears too. Hopefully I will do so for a loooooong time yet.
Anyway, looks like you finally got a version you can work with. I like it.
One minor thing I will mention is that the volume seems to dip a bit at 2:03 for a fraction of a second.
Otherwise, everything seems to be in order. None of the instruments and such are overly loud or drowning anything else out and it flows together very nicely indeed. Looking forward to the final draft.