Phantasy Star: Fringes of Algo

by **Abominae** » Wed Oct 7, '09, 9:58 pm

Don't worry... I know how to cheer her up.

With the cunning use of

by **Lyla2284** » Wed Oct 7, '09, 10:01 pm

Thanks for that.Then I can start converting it into the full version.

Oh,and does my grammar have anything to do with the spelling of certain words.Because I use UK English,and not US English.

Thanks for that Ab. :lol:

I feel better already.

by **Abominae** » Wed Oct 7, '09, 10:03 pm

No. It's mainly just punctuation issues. Other than that, it's fine.

by **Atlinsmere** » Wed Oct 7, '09, 10:05 pm

Lyla2284 wrote:Thanks for that.Then I can start converting it into the full version.
Oh,and does my grammar have anything to do with the spelling of certain words.Because I use UK English,and not US English.

Thanks for that Ab. I feel better already.

actually.It's more like this.You know what I mean?

As opposed to this. Or this. And this as well.

What it comes down to for me is spacing after a "."

As for what I have, I'll uploads it somewhere, probably megaupload and go from there.

by **Lyla2284** » Thu Oct 8, '09, 7:06 am

So....I should redo the dialogue...?!

This is going to take forever.

Always hated theses grammatical errors.Ah well,I've got more important things to do though.I still have a ton of monster animations to do.

by **Atlinsmere** » Thu Oct 8, '09, 7:26 am

Lyla2284 wrote:So....I should redo the dialogue...?! This is going to take forever. Always hated theses grammatical errors.Ah well,I've got more important things to do though.I still have a ton of monster animations to do.

And you even did it in your post. But don't worry about it. If need be, I'll do it myself. Alright?

by **Lyla2284** » Thu Oct 8, '09, 11:28 am

Thank you. I appreciate it greatly. Thanks for trying to alleviate my stress level by a little bit. I still have so much to do...

You will be given the credit you deserve,Atlin.

I'm currently working on the Demi-rescue cutscene now. And then I have to redraw the Bio-plant scene as well. It will be a bit of a challenge,though.

by **Darkil** » Thu Oct 8, '09, 3:06 pm

Just wanted to pop in and give you another :up:

on your work Lyla. Yeah it has it's quirks but it's a Demo so I don't expect a professional piece of work right away. What's awesome is you got lots of help over here so it'll turn out even better than you probably planned! Again, gratz on your hard work!

by **Lyla2284** » Thu Oct 8, '09, 6:20 pm

May I ask what those quirks are? :wink:

The sooner I know, the better it is, so I can bring you an even better full-version release.

@Atlin:I'm busy sorting out my horrible typing grammatical errors, so there's less work for you when I finally sent it over. Wouldn't want to bog you down with too much, now would I?

I guess I'm not used to typing so often, so I type the way I write.

Btw,how are my posts looking now? :wink:

by **Abominae** » Thu Oct 8, '09, 6:39 pm

Let's break this down.

It's a subject of grammar.

Specifically, An issue with punctuation, or more appropriately, spacing.

After every comma, period, colon, etcetera (any punctuation) with the exception of quotations. (see what I mean).

What you're doing is this - See?When I type like this I leave no space between commas.If I don't space,things tend to get messy.

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