Reviews of Novice Way (Ragnarok Online)

Administrator Joined: Mar 23, '07 Posts: 3440

Hello,

This topic is for reviews of Novice Way (Ragnarok Online), the fan fiction by Kaloes. You may use this topic to let Kaloes know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.

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Thoul

Sage Joined: Mar 24, '07 Posts: 1070

This is a good story. Nice work with it Kaloes.

One thing I would recommend changing in your future writings is the use of italics for dialogue. It is very odd to see italics used for this and detracted from the experience of reading the story. I'm so used to seeing quote marks that the italics made me stop and think about how to read each line. I feel it would work better like this:

Quote:

"Since when do you see a novice this day in age?" A man said to his comrade.