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Post subject: Reviews of Final Days
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 Posted: Fri Jan 11, '08, 12:40 am |
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Hello,
This topic is for reviews of Final Days, the fan fiction by Kaloes. You may use this topic to let Kaloes know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.
Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Final Days. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.
Thanks,
Thoul
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I'll Show You What Fear Is! Esper Apprentice
Joined: Jul 9, '07
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, '08, 12:42 am |
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ok i don't know how good this one will be >< as everyone knows im not good with making these kinda scenes but since there were so many peopel it was hard to do... gimme some credit =P anyways.. enjoy and whether good or bad I hope everyone enjoys.
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Gaze unto me and writhe, fools Sage
Joined: Nov 1, '07
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, '08, 6:09 pm |
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Interesting, though it didn't make me cry.
You represent... apathy.You don't really show any emotion. You can be considered cruel and cold, but you just don't really care about anything. This is just the way you are... you're quite a challenge to get close to, and others may perceive you as boring.
Zeus was the Greek excuse for having no logical explination for lightning. Hades was for the death that baffled them. Posiedon tore apart at their shores. So Athena must have explained the people who didn't believe in the gods. |
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I'll Show You What Fear Is! Esper Apprentice
Joined: Jul 9, '07
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, '08, 5:10 pm |
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i'll go back and work on this later after i finish re-updating my PSIV one and get some more done on my Story Retold and Alone in the World.
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