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Post subject: Reviews of Unexpected Visitor
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 Posted: Thu Jan 10, '08, 10:16 pm |
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Hello,
This topic is for reviews of Unexpected Visitor, the fan fiction by Tsunami. You may use this topic to let Tsunami know what you think of this story. When commenting on the story, try to go into detail about what you enjoyed or thought could be improved. Both praise and constructive criticism are encouraged. Please refrain from making non-constructive criticisms.
Please keep your comments in this thread on the subject of Unexpected Visitor. If you would like to discuss another story, please do so in that story's review thread.
Thanks,
Thoul
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Gaze unto me and writhe, fools Sage
Joined: Nov 1, '07
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, '08, 6:04 pm |
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XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I died laughing over and over. COOOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!
You represent... apathy.You don't really show any emotion. You can be considered cruel and cold, but you just don't really care about anything. This is just the way you are... you're quite a challenge to get close to, and others may perceive you as boring.
Zeus was the Greek excuse for having no logical explination for lightning. Hades was for the death that baffled them. Posiedon tore apart at their shores. So Athena must have explained the people who didn't believe in the gods. |
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UFO! Sage
Joined: May 3, '07
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, '08, 6:20 pm |
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Thanks! I tried to keep it interesting. ^_^ I wrote it for fun and I am considering writing how each encounter would go for everyone who shows up.
Glad you liked it, Sparky!
The dentist who pulls his own teeth has a fool for a patient.
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, '08, 9:29 pm |
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That was great. I loved everyone's reactions to each other. Rolf and Rudo were awesome, and then Nei's reactions to the cookies! 
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